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Male Number of posts : 92
Age : 33
Character (Race) : Kakori (Ronso)
Hometown : Bevelle
Occupation : Ronso warrior
Registration date : 2008-06-11

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PostSubject: Kakori Ronso   Kakori Ronso EmptySun Jun 15, 2008 6:29 pm

Name: Kakori Ronso

Race: Ronso

Hometown: Bevelle

Age: 8

Height: 5'3''

Weight: 106lb

Appearance: (head to foot) (appearence then clothing)

Kakori as Black hair tyed up at the back into a pony tail that reaches the base of his neck, has a unveloped almost sharp horn 3 inchs long ,dark brown eyes that look filled with sadness, has a darker nose then all the other ronso and a jagged scar going across his right cheek. he has a small mouth with two of his child fangs appearing just below his top lip. His neck is rather musclely for a ronso his age, his shoulders are well built, arms reach to the top of his legs and musclely (again for his age), his hands are big and powerful(size of a full grown human) and has claws half a inch long, his chest is also well built from 2 years of training on mt gagazet, the stomach area shows a young 6 pack, his waist is firm and hard to the touch, the top half od his legs are rather thick and start to go thinner as they work there way down and his feet are med size ronso feet. His body fur is a dark shade of blue.

just below his horn is a black head band with a tribal patten running along it, his lower torso is covered by a small dark red cloth going all the way around him with the occasional black tribal patten, his upper left arm jut below the shoulder has a black band around it with the same tribal pattern as the head band. his right hand has a red glove that ends at the second knuckles on his hand with a black skull on the back, his waist - top of his legs (about half way down his top part of his leg) is wearing red shorts with a strips missing on the outside of both sides with a small black lace where the missing strips should be, the ankles have dark red bands going around them.

Battle:
Kakori's spear: Rokagi

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Kakori fights with a spear and occasionally fights useing his bare hands as his horn is not fully developed, he is a fast fighter with his spear as he trained using it on mt gagazet. He mainly attacks with sweeping style attacks that go horizontally, but he mixes in a varied attacks with the spears end and other attacks from other directions, while fighting with his hands he fights using his short claws to deal the damage with lunging attacks. Being a ronso he uses lancet to learn the fiends attacks and uses them has his own. While being a powerful youth he is still very weak and still needs to train and also experiment his attacks as his limited attacks make him a very easy opponent to dodge. Also being as young had he is he has very little battle experience.

Overdrives:
White wind
Seed cannon
Fire breath

Personality:
His past has gave him a problem with his confidence as he often puts himself down and blames himself constently, also with his lack of battle experience he always underestimates himself making him believe that he can not fight on.

As well has these problems he is often worried around large numbers of humans. Also he is often mistrusting of others so he travels around alone alot of the time.

From being mistrusting he also has a grudge against himself which makes him very upset from time to time which makes him wonder off his own when he is with a party.

Kakori is naturally curious which can lead him into trouble as he often gets curiuos about the wrong things.

From these down sides he is very determined to carry on fighting, this makes him a vary hard oppentent to beat no matter how many times he falls to the floor.

He also looks after those who are around him even thought the times he is with someone are rare, as he is trying to make up for past mistakes.

Also he is a kind Ronso as the rest of his tribe believe that humans are inferior to themselves, and Kakori don't believe this and is often kind to humans if they give him the chance.

Biography:
4 years ago:

Back when the ronso lived aside humans in bevelle a young ronso called Kakori was born. His mother was extremly ill while being pregant with Kakori from a illness that was uncureable making her extremly ill. She died a day after Kakori was born leaving her father, also ill, with him. 2 years on Kakori's father also died from fighting in the calm lands against 2 malboro, orphaning Kakori at 2 years of age. From that time on Kakori was on his own living in the allys of Bevelle looking in the waste of the homes for food. When he was 3 years old he was picked on by the Bevelle adults for living on the streets, then he was found by a preist of Bevelle temple who took him in and taught him the ways of yevon. He lived happily with the preist, who was only young at the time and was good freinds with one of the maesters and regularly meet with him, giving Kakori regular chances to meet with him. When he was 4 the preist was out with the maester leaving Kakori home alone looking after the home until he got back. Kakori was starting to fall asleep on his mat as he heard the door open up. He got up and went into the main room when he saw the maester with two guards and the preist no where to be seen. As it turned out the preist was accused to be planning to take out a major figure head of the bevelle temple and assume that role himself, the maester had came to the home to tell the ronso that the priest was dead, killed by himself. Kakori filled up with anger has he didnt believe one word of the story as he knew that the priest was working with the head priest to find out who was planning this, and charged at the maester hitting him with his stub for a horn dealing only a minor amount of damage. As a result from his attack the maester's guards picked him up and took a sword swipe at him cutting his cheek giving him the scar he had now. Kakori was then took to a cell and kept there for a week. Then he heard that he was to be exiled from Bevelle along with all the other ronso. This left him extremly guilty as the ronso then needed to find a new home with their honour smeered in the mud.

When the ronso made there way through the clam lands and to the entrance of mt gagazet they all felt a sense of home there and decided to make their new home there. None of the ronso knew that Kakori was the reason why they where all exiled so he was adopted into a new family as he told them that he was an orphan from the age of 2. There on he was tuaght that the humans where not to be trusted but he felt differnetly as he knew what the truth was and the fact he lived with a human for 2 years of his life. From then one he decided that he must do something to bring humans and ronso together again and started training everyday with out fail at the top on mt gagazet. There he found a spear stuck into the ground. He tried everyday for 50 days to get the spear out of the rock but to no avail. On the 51st day he went back to the spear and grabbed it by the end and pulled on the blade cutting his hands. Has his blood flowed into the gap where the spear was stuck the spear became loose and came out of the rock. From that day he felt like that spear was apart of him as he felt the same way about the spear. ne never became apart from that spear from that day. 10 days after Kakori decided to name his spear. For something as majestic like this spear he decided to name it after the elder of the ronso. That name was Rokagi. He trained with that spear in the freezing cold to maximize the effect of his training in the shortest amount of time. He left his familly when he was 6 as he decided if he was to get the ronso's name cleared he needed to do it alone and he went to the summet of mt gagazet and lived there for two years training.

The present:
At the age of 8 Kakori set off from mt gagazet to search for a way to fight sin. He wanted to bring honour to his ronso kinsmen and decided that defeating sin, the greatest enemy of spira, bringing peace from a ronso hand. So he left. Although he had a small horn and his claws were starting to grow he still held his spear and walked thought the calm lands searching for a way to defeat sin without using the aeons power.

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Male Number of posts : 748
Age : 35
Character (Race) : Shinu (Human)
Hometown : Kilika
Occupation : Summoner/ Swordsman
Registration date : 2008-06-10

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PostSubject: Re: Kakori Ronso   Kakori Ronso EmptySun Jun 15, 2008 7:23 pm

The appearence is well done, great descriptions of a young ronso, which is rarely done. It's fluid and quite descriptive.
Tip: When writing in a paragraph, try to use all words if possible, and type out two or three as opposed to 2 or 3 to make it appear a bit smoother. Wink

Battle: I like this, good restrictions, good strengths.
Tip: Improvise stuff like, maybe you can give him an ice magic resistance after training in the cold so much. This can be foud out in the rp.

Personality: This is my favorite part. I see you thought about what I said and I like it.
Tip: Just be sure to develop these as we rp, and don't be afraid of having a flawed character, I like what I see.

Bio: Great. You took what I gave you and ran with it.

Overall Tip: Check grammar. Capitalization and punctuation and the like.

Great job! Accepted!
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Male Number of posts : 150
Age : 35
Occupation : Philosopher
Registration date : 2008-06-12

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PostSubject: Re: Kakori Ronso   Kakori Ronso EmptySun Jun 15, 2008 7:30 pm

Kakori strong Ronso, Kakori kill you, Kakori call you hornless with no horn on head
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